Finished lollll sorry if I'm annoying ;s
You're heaps talented omg, I can so see this in my head like. I can really picture it, the description in it is a-may-zing and you can really show what they're thinking without having to go into too much depth o-o maybe you've found your calling?
I just finished reading Father's Arms, and just thought I'd say that I think it's reaaally good. Like really good. Even the down-time bits, the backfill between dialogue is gripping. I wish there was more of this on wattpad lol, instead of all the crappy 1D stuff. Now I shall read Awakenings. Hehehe. LOL.